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Tuesday 20 February 2018

the nippers

Poster
Image result for the nippers lifeguard trainingImage result for the nippers lifeguard training
1 Always swim between the red and yellow flags
2 always go in the water with an adult or an adult watch you  
3 if you don't want to go in the water stay out of it just in case
4 if you see a lifeguard all was listen to them
5 alwas wave your and when you need help

And just remember to have fun
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3 comments:

  1. Dannielle20 February 2018 at 09:54

    this so cool liyah i rilly like it. now i know to wave when you need help.

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  2. Letitia Ann11 May 2018 at 14:24

    hey liyah you have mayed a cople mistakes but you tryed your hardesd and i really like that good job

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  3. Amber24 September 2018 at 13:44

    hi Liyah
    I think you have done really well on your poster, because you told the reader a lot of rules about going swimming on the beach.
    Maybe you should add a picture of the flags on your poster, and some more color.
    I reminisce a time when I was at a playground and I saw taylor there too, and we walked to the beach, because it wasn't far away.
    you need to have a look at how you spelled some words, re read to make sure ut makes scene.
    From Amber. :)

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