I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday 31 July 2019
Should people use animals for work?
This week for writing we had to write our opinion on Should people use animals for work
her is my work i did hope you enjoy.
Thursday 4 July 2019
The Bloodthirsty Shark
hi today we are posting some older piece of work that we have done so her my writing hope you in
joy (:
The Bloodthirsty Shark
Beneath the dark murky surface of the water lies a deadly bloodthirsty
creature.
The mysterious animal was aggressively snacking on a bloody
chunk of rotten flesh.
The remains of the bone from the carcass delicately sunk to the
bottom of the sea as the horrific creature set out for it’s scrumptious
main meal.
As night faded away the decomposed prey was no more.
The ravenous creature’s blood shot eyes locked onto a much
bigger and more succulent target.
Quickly it spread like a torpedo clenching its razor sharp teeth with
all its strength.
creature.
The mysterious animal was aggressively snacking on a bloody
chunk of rotten flesh.
The remains of the bone from the carcass delicately sunk to the
bottom of the sea as the horrific creature set out for it’s scrumptious
main meal.
As night faded away the decomposed prey was no more.
The ravenous creature’s blood shot eyes locked onto a much
bigger and more succulent target.
Quickly it spread like a torpedo clenching its razor sharp teeth with
all its strength.
Can he save her
Can her save her
Mia woke up on a cold sunny Wednesday ready to go to work at the big breakfast she hopped into the elevator Creeeeeeek! The elevator door swung open and there was a big bang. “Ahhhhhhhhhhh!” screamed Mia.
She started to fall out of nowhere she caught sight of something blue red. Spider man looked down for one second and saw someone falling. Spideman zoomed down caching her safely.
After that Spiderman hunted down Eversit and took her to the best high quality secured prison in New York. Finally Spiderman got home to his mansion and snuggle up in his pink fluffy Dora bed and thought to himself that this was a crazy day.
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