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The Bloodthirsty Shark
Beneath the dark murky surface of the water lies a deadly bloodthirsty
creature.
The mysterious animal was aggressively snacking on a bloody
chunk of rotten flesh.
The remains of the bone from the carcass delicately sunk to the
bottom of the sea as the horrific creature set out for it’s scrumptious
main meal.
As night faded away the decomposed prey was no more.
The ravenous creature’s blood shot eyes locked onto a much
bigger and more succulent target.
Quickly it spread like a torpedo clenching its razor sharp teeth with
all its strength.
creature.
The mysterious animal was aggressively snacking on a bloody
chunk of rotten flesh.
The remains of the bone from the carcass delicately sunk to the
bottom of the sea as the horrific creature set out for it’s scrumptious
main meal.
As night faded away the decomposed prey was no more.
The ravenous creature’s blood shot eyes locked onto a much
bigger and more succulent target.
Quickly it spread like a torpedo clenching its razor sharp teeth with
all its strength.
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