I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday 13 August 2019
should kids get paid to go to school
this week we have been learning how to write a persuasive piece of writing. the things we needed to include were recons for example conclusion introduction topic my topic was should kids get paid to go to school do you agree of disagree.
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Dear Liyah (Other half) It's Amber (Half)
ReplyDeleteI really loved how you added lots of pretty colors to your writing and how u stated your opinion.
Maybe next time u could reread your work and make some changes your work ... , like putting full stops in, and capital letters.
Anyway I loved your writing BYE!!!