I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday 20 December 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi there Liyah,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing another Summer Learning Journey blog post. You are doing really well so far.
What a fantastic poster you have created! The contrast in colours really help to make it stand out. I love how much detail you have put in to describe both sides of your family.
Whereabouts in America did your dad live? Have you been to America before?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma
Hi Emma i have not been to america before but i want to and my dad is from California well thank you anyway
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Kia Ora Liyah!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great poster! I really like how you included a really nice cursive title on the top. It looks really professional and very tidy. It is quite easy to read as well!
In my culture, it is also very polite to take shoes off inside, it also keeps the house tidy as well as being respectful to the family hosting. My family on my dads side are all from Invercargill too! Most of them moved to Christchurch though. Have you ever been to Invercargill? My mothers side of the family are all from Malaysia which is in Southeast Asia. But my Mum moved with my older brother 25 years ago.
I really like how you made a poster instead of just writing words on a blog post. The nice blue colours really drew my eyes to the post. Next time, do you think you could include some photos? Maybe you could put a photo of your family on the poster? It would definitely draw more people to it. But if you use images from the internet, make sure that you use photos labelled for reuse or credit the author of the photos.
You have done an awesome job and I hope to see a reply from you soon!
Keep up the amazing work,
- Nadia :)
Hi Nadia thank you so much
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