Heres another YAY do you like my poem i hope you enjoy
Saturday 28 December 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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UMM LIYAH...
ReplyDeleteLooks familer ...
YOU LITTLE .... YOU LITTLE WORM yes you YOU COPEID ME !!!!!!!
Any way I like the set up of your work.
But you shouldn't copy peoples work next time. Ok?
You shoulden't get full points for that.
AMber:)
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ReplyDeleteMorena Liyah,
ReplyDeleteWell done on posting and continuing to participate in the SLJ this year. Remember to keep being Cybersmart at all times by being positive, thoughtful, original and helpful in your blogging and commenting on others. This will increase your chance of gaining points and possibly winning one of the awesome prizes, not forgetting that it keeps your learning up over the school break!
I'd love to see if you could create another poem, keeping originality in mind. I know this seems like it could be a tricky activity however I know you can do it. Here is a great website to help you, https://www.poetry4kids.com/lessons/poetry-writing-lessons/
I'll check back and see how you went soon.
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma