Hi guys i have just created a goggle drawing with 4 similes on it. comment if theirs any thing i can change
I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday 6 December 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Liyah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a member of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer. I'm so glad that you've made a start on the teaser week activities. It's good to get a bit of practice in before that programme officially begins on Monday.
I really like the way you've presented this activity. The colours you've used really make your post stand out on your blog - it caught my eye right away! These are great similes as well. My favourite is the one about the cat. I can picture exactly what you mean when I read it. Do you like creative writing?
Well done on completing your first Summer Learning Journey task! I can't wait to read more posts from you soon.
Bye for now,
Mikey :)